So, mnemex wanted a break, and we agreed that I'd use the most complete draft we could find and fill in what I could. He's now going over it and making it better, and raising an eyebrow or two at my quick fill-in dialogue. As I noted, I wrote fast, not well.
Me: I wanted to make sure the gist of it got in. I don't remember exactly what you said.
mnemex: But... this is...
Me: What? Blahblah silly villains blahblah did this naughty thing blahblah go fix. What more do you need?
mnemex: Less. We need less.